In today's lesson, Danielle critiqued my business card and gave me some useful feedback. She explained that the shadow on the edges of the card looked out of place and that the speech bubble needed a thicker outline, she also thought that my artist name looked as if it was floating off the page. Danielle said that she loved the character and the rest of the card looked fine.
My critique of Danielle's pirate.
My only issue with this drawing is I feel that the knee area of the character looks slightly odd, as If the character had broken it's legs. I also struggled to tell the characters gender, although the overall design of the character looked great.
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